ei śloka - this verse; kariyācha - you have composed; pāñā santoṣa - getting satisfaction; tomāra hṛdayera - of your heart; arthe - by the meaning; duṅhāya - to both; lāge doṣa - there is an offense.

“You have composed this introductory verse to your great satisfaction, but the meaning you have expressed is contaminated by offenses to both Lord Jagannātha and Śrī Caitanya Mahāprabhu.