yadyapi - although; ei śloke - in this verse; āche - there are; pañca - five; alaṅkāra - literary embellishments; ei pañca-doṣe - by the above-mentioned five faults; śloka - the verse; kaila - has been made; chārakhāra - spoiled.

“Although there are five literary ornaments decorating this verse, the entire verse has been spoiled by these five most faulty presentations.